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丽人行

暮归路上丽人行，锦裙飘舞衣穿绫。
秀发端庄似瀑布，双目炯亮潭水清。
唇齿犀利尤如剑，笑容喜颜带微情。
沉鱼落雁姿容俊，闭月羞花绝代婷。
袅袅芙蓉出波裂，斑斑红艳映雪明。
虽是寒临秋将尽，但觉春风拂面迎。
丽人意远且娴静，若非瑶女凡间行。


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[[i] 本帖最后由 黄军1 于 2011-5-8 15:17 编辑 [/i]]

丽人行，犹如仙女又到凡间来。楼主下功夫了，诗很美。欢迎新人常来诗韵斋。送一红心。

不客气，以后我会积极支持论坛上工作，会再写一些诗的。

傍晚了，路上的一面之缘，楼主都观察的如此仔细，经鉴定为一资深光棍，红心一枚，与君共勉

哈哈哈哈，多谢了，以后我会多发些自己的诗词的。

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唇齿犀利尤如剑，楼主应该是与丽人进行了一定的交流，不然何以知之？难道是楼主的熟人？

很有想象力的美人行，同赞……


[color=Indigo]             丽 人 行

    暮归忽见丽人近，锦裙飘舞衣织绫。
    秀发颠扑似瀑布，流盼炯亮灵水清。
    唇齿微露如白雪，笑欢喜愉带微伶。
    沉云落鲤肤肌靓，避鹤羞星绝色婷。
    袅袅芙蓉出波洁，斑斑红艳映绿明。
    虽是寒临秋将尽，又觉春风拂面迎。
    丽人去远意难静，望随香气逐芳行。




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诗篇很美，对丽人的描述很具体到位，先从整体上一句写出印象，在从上至下，从静到动展开描写，让读者有亲临的感觉。这是一篇难得的诗作，看过之后浮想联翩啊，是灵感啊！